Let's try this again
Just in case you didn't! This post was forward dated so it will stay at the top for a while...giving everyone a chance to respond. YES, that was a hint if you have not yet responded! Anyway, what I want you to notice is that the latest entry, day eighteen of Trail of the Archmage is posted below. Enjoy!
Somehow, for the first time in literally hundreds of posts, Blogger actually let me down. This post disappeared into the void sometime after it was published. I was wondering this morning why I had so few responses to the request. Anyway, just so we all know that Arvil Bren is safe...I use a feature that e-mails every post to an e-mail address I set up exclusively for that purpose. Which is where I went and retrieved this:
Hi all! This has been a hectic period, coupled with Arvil going through a stretch that I have not been looking forward to writing. Once again I fell off schedule. Friday's episode is posted, and today's should post later today to catch me up...if not there will be two tomorrow for sure.
Note...I did get that done!
Your patience through the turbulence is greatly appreciated.
So here's the exciting things that have contributed to the turbulence:
I'm sure most of you don't really look much at the header up there at this point, but if you do you will see that it changed. Arvil's Dusty Tomes, which is the archive of the first hundred and fifty days of his journal, has been deemed 'complete', and the current adventure Trail of the Archmage has its own new site. In being 'complete' the first volume of the journal opens some doors that a serial cannot pass through, and I will be approaching Bethesda Softworks regarding publishing options. Many of the great comments you have left over the past months will certainly contribute to that effort, and I thank you more than I can express.
In the wake of my thanks I have a request for your further support. Two requests actually. The first will take just a moment of your time. At the end of this post is a small link that says
The second request is familiar territory. Find new readers. There is a new twist to this, since they no longer really have to deal with the serial fiction aspect of things. Volume one is a stand alone novel that is available for free reading; I think a good one. Share it with your friends. Who can turn down a free book if their friend says it is a good one?
Thanks to you all once again, don't forget to comment, and may you walk on warm sands!
54 Comments:
Brisbane, Australia
Middletown, Ohio, USA
Newport, Michigan, United States of America
Pratvvile, Alabama USA
I have read all your Morrowind story with Alvin. I have enjoyed them. Thanks.
Love your writing. I ripped through the first 'Volume', and now eagerly await each addition
Nathan - Canberra, Australia.
Champaign, Illinois, USA
Jamestown, TN, USA
El Cajon, California USA
It's good to hear that things are straitened out, now. I was worried for a while, there.
Lakewood, WA
Cheverly Maryland USA
I look forward to reading your tales very much and it truly caps my evenings or more often I wait and end my week.
Keep up the good work!!
Skydevil14 - Lord of Vas
It's great!
Elara , Dallas , TX USA
I read it regular, find it very good.
I do mis a picture now and then.
Dan
Copenhagen, Denmark
Phoenix,AZ USA
Great Story, I love how Arvil Bren has developed.
Downingtown, PA, USA
This is truly excellent work. Good luck getting published. Are you already linked off the Bethseda website? I think that's how I found this--if you are, you've already got one foot in the door!
Newport Beach/Stanford, CA
Sydney, AUSTRALIA
Very nice work Tim!
Augusta, Gerogia, USA
Cooma, Australia.
You have a great talent. Good luck with the publishing.
Joseph.
Thank you for taking the time to explain what's been happening.
I appreciated that, I was REALLY worried that Arvil Bren might have gone from my life!!(see my earlier comments!)
As always I love reading the journal- yours is the only website I regularly read; it's my first stop every morning(in England it doesn't appear till the day after you print it) and MISS it terribly when it fails to appear!!!!
It's brilliant, and I really hope it's a roaring success and gets published - it's way beyond just a computer game walk-through, and reads excellently in its own right(write?!), as a novel. Your characerisation and plot handling are easily in the top level of general literature.
As well as reading your journal, probably the first of its kind, we all are on tenterhooks to see how it develops as a genre in the wider readership of the "real" world!! Morrowind invades reality, at last! It is a very exciting new development in online authorship, which I hope will be very successful for you.
_ Angela, Brighton, England.
Regular reader since Day 1. Need my morning fix of Arvil Bren!
Alvaiazere, Portugal. (No, you won't find it on a map!)
Perth, Australia
Just another vote of confidence for some really good storys.
I found your site a few months ago when my son intoduced me to Morrowind and have been faithfully following Arvil Bren ever since.
Keep up the good work.
David Harrison,
Raleigh, NC, USA
Ah, I think this has been covered (a thousand times over) but yes, this is by far the most wonderful piece of writing I have come across in about a year of searching.
Adelaide, Australia
Hagerstown, Maryland, U.S.A
Santa Ana, CA
Regular reader, posted once before. I'm curious: does the sequence of events in the journal match an actual game you played?
Antioch, IL, USA Thanks!
Belfast, Northern Ireland
Reading this got me playing again.
Love what you've done so far, please keep it up!
I tried leaving a comment here yesterday.... I guess that was during the "troubled times."
Upstate South Carolina here. I've been reading from day 12 or 13 or so. (If you check the IP's (since you've said you know your readers ...at least where they're reading from)they've changed 3 times or so.) The RSS feed is the first thing I check when I get on my computer in the morning.
Boston, MA
Enjoyed your writing so much that I went and bought the game. Just completed the main quest, on day 302! Look forward to your post every day - keep em coming, and thanks.
Michael
North Bay, ON, Canada
San francisco,CAlifornia, U.S.A.
Yes,yes I read it even though I'm Telvanni :)
Bergen,Norway
Mt. Vernon, Iowa, USA
I appreciate how you manage to squeeze so much detail out of battles that always seem like 10 seconds and a cloud of dust to myself. Bravo.
Coming to you live from the City of Roses, Portland, Oregon....
Perth, Western Australia
Hey Tim, I've read this from day 1 now, hope you get the publishing rights, will be a best-seller!
Tucson AZ
Thank you for such an excellent spark of novel into the world of Morrowind.
Bangkok, Thailand
My character has been following along with your story since about day 50. Wonderfully exciting story!
Scott
Santa Rosa, CA, USA
Zaanstad, The Netherlands
I started reading when I saw it advertised on Morrowind Summit. Great Story.
Bedford, IN, US
I've been reading since about Day 30, I think.
Seattle, WA
Corpus Christi, Texas. Been reading since the early days, and very much loving it. Congratulations on finishing Volume One!
Philadelphia,Pennsylvania,USA. Love your story. Keep on trucking!
Andrew, from Michigan. I've been reading and enjoying your story for some time now, thank you :)
Frimley, Surrey, UK
York, Pennsylvania USA
been here for half a year now, and still loving it!
Rochester, New Hampshire, United States of America
Colorado Springs, Colorado.
Sliedrecht, The Netherlands.
Copenhagen, Denmark
Thank you for a really good read of Arvil Bren. I have just finished reading from day one to your last entry of Twenty: New Hall (Journal Two).
I am also reading some of the other long (and still on-going) fictions that resemble yours and are featured over at Waiting4Oblivion's site: The Story of Trey, The Tale of Sudhendra Vahl, and Serene of Cyrodiil. (Just so you know what I am comparing.)
All of you writers each have strengths and weaknesses in your writing - who doesn't. ;)
Tim, you can of course just chuck my criticism as you see fit, this next part is only my humble personal opinion. As a fledgling fan fiction writer myself, I know that critism is really nice to receive even though you don't agree with the reviewer. :)
Overall, I like the way you weave your own political views of the affairs of the Guild of Mages. You break free of the constraints that the game throws at you if you were to follow each quest literally. Instead, you put in your own line of thinking and even turn a quest over to a junior mage as a way of testing her abilities and make her 'grow up' . Really impressive. This has made your piece of work very involved and is, to me at least, the best part of your writing. The reasoning behind Bren assuming the position of Archmage was intriguing to follow, and I'm looking forward to read how he will attain the 'yes' from the Great House Telvanni to being named the Hortator, when he is also the Archmage of the Guild of Mages, the arch enemy.
After reading the other three aforementioned fictions first, I was a little disappointed in the first many days of Arvil Bren and even considered stopping to read, I'm sorry to say. This first hesitation was caused by the cursory description of Bren's background, his reason for being in jail (touched more upon later on, I know), the quick fight descriptions etc.
This is of course very subjective to every reader so I mean no offense. As a reader, I like detailed descriptions of almost anything, provided they move the plot along or leave the reader with new knowledge that helps to immerse said reader in the story.
You have sort of 'grown into' the style of Arvil Bren, and that is why I am now pleased to commend you and your writing, since the first cursory and quick descriptions have later evolved into really nice, detailed and immersive descriptions on everything from fights, conflicts, and Bren's reasoning behind his actions and emotions towards people, quests, or places.
Normally I read texts ranging from Dostovjeski to the backs of cereal boxes. Reading fan fiction about my favorite game, Morrowind, has been the top treat for me this summer.
Good luck on your publishing ideas and on continuing this enormous writing task.
Montreal, Canada
Your blog is truely amazing. Keep up the good work. Too bad Arvil Bren isn't a Telvanni (I'm a loyal Telvanni).
Bristol, Rhode Island, USA
definitly good reading. I've been reading this for about a week and i just can't get enough of it!!. Continue with your path to neverine and never stop!!!
Mesa,Arizona USA! USA!
Fantastic Work, Tim! Keep up the good work and pressure Bethesda.
Garrett Ghostflame
Manteca, CA - USA
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